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Description
Disclaimer: Idea and Original Characters by VendettaPrimus.
Patrons will Get with June 2018 Rewards:
⚫ Sketches + Line Art + Base Colors
⚫ Step By Step JPG Complete Progression Pictures
⚫ HI-RES .png 3000px 300ppi
June 2018 Rewards will be send between days 3-5 of July 2018, once the pledges are processed.
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These are from a commission I've done, I've been given permission from my client to share them with my patrons 
This is an example of a 1 Character Full Body / Mixed Media / Simple Free Background Commission (LadyKraken Commission Info).
Thank you!
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactFirst off... This is an amazing piece of artwork. The anatomy, the lines, the colours, all are really beautiful! The clothing is well drawn and the hair looks pretty good! The places that you added the wrinkles in the clothing are well placed and don't look out of place.
Some things that I do suggest need worked on, in my opinion, is the hair and lighting of the hair. It looks good but I do feel like it is a little lazily drawn. If it weren't for some of the other colours and streaks in the hair, I would almost think that she has dreadlocks. Some colouring in the face and hands are a little awkward. In the face it makes me think that she didn't blend her concealer all that well and has a very "plain" face with not a lot of colour.
Overall, there isn't a lot to criticize with this piece and it looks amazing! Keep doing what you're doing and continue to improve. Remember, there is no limits to improving!
Have a wonderful day!